Bhayden71297

Hey! Long time no talk huh? ;p Just as I said, I stopped on by. And by the looks of it....i have almost nothing to correct! Amazing peace. Brilliant. Well ...

I like this a lot! Great job! A suggestion though: Your second paragraph where you begin the letter is a little...choppy. Your punctuation is something that could be differently arranged. ...

You have quite a few errors hear with grammar. Only withe the letter "i" though. I knew it was a dream A mere fairytale But still it seemed Like if ...

(Any comments/reviews welcome- Thanks, Brie♥) “The Road to Recovery,” read the sign. I wondered about the purpose, and walked past it. Before I knew what was happening I was teetering ...

Hey! I like the simplicity of this poem. A few things though: In your poem, "i" needs to be capitalized. It always should be. the wind sept cold over my ...

Thanks for all the reviews guys! :D

(This was a poem I wrote awhile ago. It was the first poem I ever wrote, and i know the rhyme scheme is sketchy, but again, the first poem I ...

Hey again! :D This was really great. I loved it. Found so much truth behind the words too...which is ironic since the poem is titled lies...but it describes it all ...

Sorry i took so long to get to this. Wow! I really really really liked this! This piece does describe EXACTLY how I feel. When i was younger, I was ...

This was great! I thought I'd look it over since you commented on my piece- I Can't Win. You've strongly captured the ways of a coward for sure.. My favorite ...

(This is a short story. I don't plan on continuing it or adding much. Any sort of comment/review is welcome. Just let me know what you think.) There’s a room, ...

I need a little bit more here to keep hooked. It was great idea behind it so far..but you need more. A few suggestions: Rain, a 13 year old girl, ...

I somewhat agree with the person above me. I like the way you end the stories, quick, and surprising, leaving with many questions. But he truth is, they don't have ...

This piece...was great. Amazing. I liked this very much! One thing that is preferable to the reader is spaces between each paragraph. Otherwise, it just looks like a big jumble ...

This was very insightful. I liked it a lot, great job. I have one thing I'd like to point out though. Everyone said she was skinny as (a) stick I ...