Betheny

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I will take your word almighty Scarlettfire, as you are the holy creater of this world *grovels at your feet with humble respect* :smt002 It dosen't seem to do that ...

I've just PMed Demoness now giving her an update on the current situation, so hopefully we'll get a reply soon :) *Side note, how long do people think it should ...

Shadowlight! I truely adore Hector's speach! Very nicely done :)

The knocking at the door could be anyone really. I was thinking an opening for Demoness, yes, but I'm not sure who if I'm honest.

Ulta | 'Assassin's' Alley Hide Out I felt like a broken doll. Something a child had carelessly dropped then trapmled on several thousand times. I was stood in the back ...

Put simply: I love it. Looking at it, the trunk of the trees appears slightly celtic in style which kind of threw me at first but on closer inspection the ...

I'm afraid I have to agree with Jenthura, on the fact that the size is a little over the top. However taking your advice and saving to my computer to ...

Well the rhyming is a bit off... No, joke! Please don't hate me! I love the way this peice flows, the fact some of it rhymes but dosen't have to ...

It's been a while since; You've spoken to me with your own voice, Even if the words are crule. It's been a while since; You've touched me with your own ...

I am also confused. The story feels a bit all over the place. Reading back some of the parts contradict one another and make it difficult to follow. Could I ...

Appologies. Silly thing double posted

(again many thanks DSF) Ulta | Back Alley's Captain Oswald? Or Lynx? I din't know which to believe. He'd been so convincing as 'Captain Oswald' how did I know this ...

Many thanks, my imagination failed me

*Deleted* Sorry I messed up, ignor this please