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BethGoth05

  • Writing Tips Re: One bothersome paragraph!

    Also, you can take each idea in there and turn it into its own paragraph. Your summery goes from a paragraph to maybe a page or two, but readers will ...

    Nov 4, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: One bothersome paragraph!

    The time-span is unclear for me. Is he almost due, maybe half-way or even on the newly pregnant side? This is too condensed for me to tell. The story begins ...

    Nov 4, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: One bothersome paragraph!

    I'm just not happy with it! It feels like I can't continue before I sort it out! Does anyone have any tips on how to improve it? Time passed too ...

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Snowed In (Tin Man fanfiction)

    Oh, thanks! :D By the way, about the night thing. I did mention it was night again :P Glitch and I are like kin, 'cause I'm dyspraxic. I could see ...

    Nov 3, 2009
  • Fanfiction Short Stories Re: Snowed In (Tin Man fanfiction)

    First off, I had a really bad case of writer's block when I was writing this, so it's not my best work. I'm going to work on the sequel soon ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: a rose for the abused..

    This is gorgeous, absolutely lovely. I loved it, but it took me a while to work out what you meant by "peddles." By reading the next few lines, I figured ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Fanfiction Novels Re: Suite Life of Z&C --- Dark Intentions - Chapters 1 & 2

    Well, it certainly brought back many memories. I used to watch the show when I was younger (but not as much as now.) I enjoyed this story very much! :D ...

    Oct 23, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: What influenced you to write what you are writing right now?

    Recently, I've watched Tin Man (a really cool TV movie which is a remake of Wizard of Oz.) I knew I wanted to write a fanfiction right away but wasn't ...

    Oct 18, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Saddest Book

    The End by Lemony Snicket. Made me cry buckets the first time I read it and will continue to make me cry buckets everytime I reread it.

    Oct 18, 2009
  • Fiction Discussion Re: Swearing In Stories

    I have used swearing in my stories before but usually I write "damn", "crap", "bloody" etc, you know vulgar words that aren't considered swears (in my opinion, anyway.) I used ...

    Oct 17, 2009
  • Randomosity Archive Re: A random fact about yourself

    This fact isn't so random, but it is the most important to me (IMO.) I'm dyspraxic, as well as mildly autistic. Having autism rules, it rarely bugs me.

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Randomosity Re: What random thing did you do today?

    I recorded myself singing Across the Universe by Fiona Apple. I know I can't sing but I insist on doing it anyway.

    Oct 16, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: How do I get my mojo back?

    It was due in today and just gave in the work I've done, but I will have help next time. My mojo's just starting to co-operate with my brain too. ...

    Oct 15, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: What Is Your Favorite Writing Tip?

    I have a similar problem. Sometimes, I write out what's going to happen before I write it, so I won't forget it. But once I've done that, I lose interest! ...

    Oct 15, 2009
  • Writing Tips Re: What Is Your Favorite Writing Tip?

    I've always liked the tip that you seriously shouldn't stress about the first draft. I think it's something that a lot of writers hear but don't really take to heart. ...

    Oct 14, 2009


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