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Re: Previous Mistakes
Hello, Instantly registered after seeing this to review the lyrics that BetaTested wrote on one of my hip hop instrumentals. The fact that he didn't wrote about hoes, money, or ...
Jun 30, 2011 -
Re: Silent Deceit
Sorry I haven't replied in ages. I've been doing exams at college, so just had to prioritise. Anyway, back to this. Thanks to everyone, especially for the recent comments, lots ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
This was completely AHMAYZING! the lyrics are really cool and kinda explain my life. I know i am a girl, but who says girls cant be in the army?...haha yeah ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
I must admit, great song. If you put a good beat with it, it sounds like an actual band could play this. Keep it up!! :D There is a link ...
May 27, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
I've only had a quick scan through the other reviews so please forvive me if I repeat anything. With that said, I think you've got some alright lyrics here. I'm ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
This is rather good. You did a great job with this. Just on thing, in the first and last part you rhymed every two lines like this, Things I never ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
Hi! I really liked these lyrics and the way you gave us the link to hear the beat of the song. I listened to that while reading and I thought ...
May 3, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
No problem! Fair enough. Your lyics, your rules. Regarding chorus etc. ... yeah I can see that now lol :$ my bad, and don't worry I know the technique. Ok, ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
First of all I just want to say I think the topic's great. I definitely know the situation and even if it gets quite personal at times (which I think ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
Haha, Jab is definitely okay! :D I did listen to it with the beat! Which is probably why I enjoyed it so much. It's much easier to listen to the ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
Hello again! I got your request, so I shall give whatever feedback I can! :D I liked this song much better than the last one I looked at. This one ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
Hello! A review as requested...Ummm, ok, so lyrics aren't my thing, but I'm going to have a go :) You've got a good beat going on here. I'm going to ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
Nice Work! I like it a lot... the beat is fit well too! "My plan after school is to join the army But it seems like I can't, it's not ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Previous Mistakes
Previous Mistakes. - - (Beta Tested) - - Things I never did, and people never met, All the wrong choices made, so easy to forget. But when I look back ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: The May Day Review Day Check-In Thread
Don't wish to be a bummer or anything, but might competitive reviewing make the criticism less clinical? If it's being rushed or forced etc ??? Just a thought! BetaTested
May 1, 2011
