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Re: Random piece of thought...
As it is I’ve always loved prologues, they are useful enticer to encourage the reader to get hooked on the book. I often know just from reading the prologue whether ...
Jun 13, 2012 -
Re: In a Moment
This strikes me as very personal, and I can certainly feel the raw emotion being portrayed by you the writer. I found your writing style very impressive, but what I ...
Jun 13, 2012 -
Re: Culprit
Hello I wont pretend that I have a great knowledge of poetry, but I loved this. You really do demonstrate such an exquisite flair with words. “She skips uninvited through ...
Nov 25, 2011 -
Re: Heroes and Demons (Chapter 1)
Hello, I have to say everyone likes this sort of character, deep down we all wish we were a bit more like him! For me personally I see a lot ...
Nov 24, 2011 -
Re: Currently untitled, Prologue attempt!
Hey, seriously thank you both for your feedback! :) Really helpful, will take on board all you've said! Cheers Ben
Nov 23, 2011
