Benrobertringrose

Hello Seriously, I have to admit that I think this is incredible. I read this once through, enjoyed it so much I instantly re read and enjoyed it even more ...

The Watchers. Ever felt as if you’re being watched? As it happens you are. Loneliness. It’s something people run from, fear even. Yet for me I find a degree of ...

Hello, I enjoyed this, a really interesting little piece. I think a particular strength was your use of dialogue to demonstrate your characters personalities. I believe you have a good ...

Hello, I have to say everyone likes this sort of character, deep down we all wish we were a bit more like him! For me personally I see a lot ...

Hello, I must say this is extremely impressive, especially, and with no disrespect intended taking your age into account! Your only 12! For someone of your age you display a ...

Hello, This is a very impressive piece, I really enjoyed it. Your descriptions create vivid images in my mind I felt every word. I particularly enjoyed the sentence about the ...

Hello, A very solid start, I can certainly see this blossoming into a very good novel. You’ve created an interesting likeable character in one-eye, I look forward to developing more ...

Hello, I have to be honest poetry isn't my thing, I very rarely read poetry. However I'm so glad I read yours. After reading this I will definitely be reading ...

Hello, Honestly, I have to admit that despite this not being the usual thing I would go for, I really did enjoy it! I developed an instant liking towards your ...

Hello, Wow, I don’t have a lot of criticism on that piece. I can draw a lot of comparisons on a popular book I read recently called the hunger games? ...

Hello I appreciate this has already been highlighted, but I must agree a couple of sentences confuse me! However, there are places where I’m reading thinking this is seriously impressive. ...

Hey, seriously thank you both for your feedback! :) Really helpful, will take on board all you've said! Cheers Ben

Hi, this is my first ever attempt at writing fiction, really enjoying it so far! As I lack experience in writing all feedback would be appreciated. Also I'm aware I ...

Hello, I must admit I really enjoyed this; genre wise it isn’t the usual thing that would interest me but I was pleasantly surprised. I felt a real connection to ...

Hi, A very impressive moving piece of work I especially enjoyed the beginning, however saying that the whole thing was really well put together! I found your writing style very ...