Benrobertringrose

Hi, could you possibly review this short story for me? Much appreciated. Ben

Redemption How far would you go to right a wrong? I am, by no means naïve, nor am I in denial. I completely accept the reasons why I’m now alone; ...

Hi Ahmad! Iv'e entered this piece into a competition, I can still edit it and would love some feedback just in case there is anything I can do to improve ...

Hello, The first thing for me personally that was evident was your impressive writing style! This is really well written; you illustrate the scene’s beautifully with your descriptions. I have ...

Wow, very thought provoking! It’s insightful in a peculiar sort of way; I mean this as a compliment. Certainly a unique topic, the way you deliver it is very effective. ...

Hello A very impressive piece. Certainly had me hooked. You use the fact that the main character is being bullied to create sympathy and as a result us the readers ...

Would be extremely grateful for a review as I'm entering this into a competition and wouldn't mind some feedback on it! post938281.html#p938281 Thank you! :), If you ever need a ...

Would be extremely grateful for a review as I'm entering this into a competition and wouldn't mind some feedback on it! Thank you! :), If you ever need a review ...

I watch mesmerized by the faltering flames of a dying fire. I picture the quizzical expression that must be etched across my tattered face. Desperately, I struggle to shake myself ...

Hello Ahmad, this is very impressive. Particular strength for me personally is simply the idea. A very new, innovative idea! In the first couple of sentences you instantly illustrate the ...

Hello I wont pretend that I have a great knowledge of poetry, but I loved this. You really do demonstrate such an exquisite flair with words. “She skips uninvited through ...

Hello A very thought provoking interesting piece. I particularly like the idea, its relatable for many people; this helps readers make a connection. For such a short piece you evoke ...

This cover is amazing! Just stumbled upon it and was very impressed! For something you do as a hobby you've got some pretty good skills going on! :) Ben

Hello, I love this! For me personally in the wolf you’ve created a character that is very likable! For this reason alone I would continue to read, but when you ...

Hello, In many respects this is a breath of fresh air! You describe both characters and surroundings with undeniable success. But the thing I particularly like about this is the ...