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BenToomey

Work in progress

I am rather new to all this I'd appreciate honest feedback on what you think. I'm really nervous my writing's been private but I thought trial by fire would be best way to go
  • A work in Progress

    I'm seeing what other people think of my writing if it goes well I might put my other work up

    • Short Story
    • Fantasy ยท Action / Adventure
    19 min read


Keep your face always toward the sunshine - and the shadows will fall beyond you.
— Walt Whitman