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Re: Trading Cards
Twenty years. Twenty full years since I was in this house. This was one of my favourite openings. I know you're writing non-fiction but this start is simple and at ...
Jan 6, 2010 -
Re: Personal Essay (!!Need critiques!!)
I thought that was fantastic, I particularly like how it was unique :). I was thoroughly interested until the end! I personally thought the beginning was the most captivating! The ...
Jan 5, 2010
