BenFranks

Thumbs down to the Ian Fleming's original books, they're too slow in plot, but I love the man for inventing clearly the best thing in the world. Thumbs up to ...

Jaden :) Don't mean to sound confusing or anything, but your post kind of defeats the point in mine.... ... Besides Reg needs to go to the hospital because of ...

Hey there! Hopefully this wasn't a waste of an hour! I'm Ben and this is a short piece to help you guys write and perfect your Non-fiction. Obviously, I'm not ...

Heya Grin! Okay, I loved this loads. At first I wasn't sure about your rhyme because it seemed a little force and cheesy, but as I read on it worked ...

Thankyou :D

Hair beautifully black As a night at sea; Skin, a pearl white, Like the froth of a majestic wave. Your walk so gallant And proud; Your stride so stunning, And ...

*Pokes* Want to review something? :D This is a bit'a personal work so it's probably a mess, but I'll value any thoughts you have xD (it's poetry)

Be careful not to god-mod the Alis character please. She can't be immortal or perfect as a fighter. >_> Reg Carter I held my wrist. That new amateur had some ...

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Hey there, There's a few things that make this piece lacking in what it should be and generally it's due to your use of punctuation and structuring. Moslty this is ...

Reg Carter I looked at Bree and realised we were alone again. I sat next to her. It was the only time in my life I'd ever felt nervous -- ...

Quiz is long... Quiz is popular... xD

Mmk, thankyou.

Reg Carter Bree looked right through me. I looked back at her and I winced. Bree had broken through my armour. I smiled at her and just watched her for ...

Love it. Did you do this yourself? I think the choice to show it and black and white is the best thing ever, the angle of the frame is excellent ...