BenFranks

Bond "Anyone got any champagne?" I asked, spritefully. "It's been a jolly long day and I feel like a spot of the fizz!" 008 sighed, "We can't plan, if we're ...

Hello there! :) The title, "Untitled", I don't know if it was intentional, but I thought it kind of set the bar for the mystery that was kind of elaborated ...

Bit'a poetry Kitty for you! It's the edited version so hopefully there won't be too much nitpicking, :) but I'd value your thoughts on it: - It's called "Yours Truly" ...

Hey there! Just a tip: to make the poem easier to read try placing your author's note in a "spoiler" you can do this by either highlighting your note and ...

Hey there! What was magnificent about this poem was the constant implicity and yet, although mysterious, a somewhat clarity of meaning. This shows it's very well written! What I will ...

Reg Carter There was an underlying urge on my part to take my gun and blow Jack's brains out. Along with that ignorant little friend of his, but I knew ...

Hey there! Okay, when you started this I must admit I was a bit iffy about what was going to come out of it because it was a little bit ...

@Kay - Thankyou! Makes me proud to be a writer :D @Isha - Aw, thanks! Glad you liked it :)

Hello Ayumi, I'm Ben. I realise you've mentioned this hasn't yet been edited, but I thought I'd give you a few comments and suggestions, so I hope they help! ***This ...

Hey there! I love the narrative voice of this poem because its so dramatic and to the point. Its beautiful and elegant and I really come away from it feeling, ...

Haha, I do admit Fleming has his moments, but sometimes he can go a bit "Austen" on a situation. :)

Bond "Bloody good graphics for a non-movie," I laughed. "Any'oo Mr. Not-008, as you've seem to have saved our backs thus far, I'm all for following you! Any ideas?" I ...

Nice one Kay ;)

Hey there! I must admit, this is quite a good poem after the fifth line, because there you get some real pace, rhythm and originality to your poetry. I have ...

I second Karsten, she's a genius :D