BenFranks

Thanks Kay (:

Love Sweeney Todd :)

Hey there Zebra! Just reviewed a piece of your work for you! :) I'm glad you've decided to join YWS and I hope you enjoy it here. Anyway! A few ...

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Hey there! I must say I found the repetition in this quite cheery and it was one of those poems that even though the line length varied oddly, it was ...

Haha, thankyou :)

Oo I got mentioned :) I did 172 in my first month :) Yay! ;D And got to 200 by the second :) *dances* You'll be featured if you put ...

Hey there! I definitely would second the nitpicks mentioned by the user above me, but in terms of my own thoughts and feelings, I think that this poem needs to ...

Hey there! I thought that this was very well written actually! However, I'm not sure about your last few lines. Firstly, I do agree with the 1st reviewer that more ...

Hey there Zebra! I got to say I absolutely adore your start here! It's wonderful and beautifully rhythmic. But your first "problem" or my first nit-pick is when I get ...

Bit'a poetry that could do with some feedback if your in the mood Dems (: Hopefully it's not too bad since it's the edited version ;D Thankyouu ~Ben

Hi there! :) If I'm completely honest, my views on this are a little negative because there's only two strong points I can see and they are: 1) Uniqueness 2) ...

Don't worry :) I know you probably are going through the emotions, I was just thinking along a "future note" basis if you ever felt you wanted to get the ...

Reg Carter I smiled and jogged up to him. I took his hand and gave it a good shaking. "About time we got the old crew back, eh?" I laughed. ...

Yeah, I can see how "Cheeky" can appear irrelevant, but I used it because that's how I see them. It's one of those personal things that only really make sense ...