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General Laruzelski I walked past the four G.O. members that were saluting infront of me. I didn't have any need to talk to them, it would be a measly waste ...

Hey there! Right, I'll begin with the nitpicks and see if we can refine your technical accuracy a notch! :wink: I woke up with my eyes still too sluggish to ...

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Hey there Kay! I love the dialogue of this, and it's kind of a vulnerable side to Riley and I really like that! What I will mention is perhaps refrain ...

Woohoo! Good to hear :)

Name: General S. Laruzelski Age(13+): 57 Gender: Male Personality: A man who has little mercy, but a lot of pride. He has a blatent disregard for all human life and ...

Bumped! I'd really like more people posting in the Non-Fiction, hopefully this might help those who want to have a crack for the first time or those wanting to refine ...

Hey there :wink: Intriguing title! Come meet me where the sun shines. where we greet the new day. One filled with so many possibilities. The sun's rays extend to infinite. ...

I think it's good. There's the odd storybook that lasts, but sometimes they die out because the plot goes rotten. Some people enjoy taking on numerous characters at a time, ...

Reg Carter I couldn't particularly blame Riles for not giving me a shift to watch over her, hey, she'd probably be dead already if she weren't a young girl. Hell, ...

Reg Carter I watched angrily as Riles interrogated Sal like she was a helpless puppy wretched from the streets. I knew that if it was her, I'd shoot her for ...

For being welcoming, social and a warm, nice addition to the YWS community who has helped me with some beautiful reviews!

For having the best name on YWS.

That is something that took me a long time to figure out too, especially with the whole color/colour thing. That drove me nuts. I used to just think there were ...

Okay, I'll have it done by the end of the day hopefully, but most likely it wont be until saturday. Due to revision :wink: