BenFranks

Hey fiction, You know what? This is one of the hardest pieces to critique ever. The content is personal and you portray your emotions consistently and confidently throughout. Despite the ...

Hey there! Like Snoink said, the structure is a bit poor to follow, but I think if you added some punctuation it'd be easier to read because we'd have you ...

Hey Hey! I adored this piece, the message is clear and explicit, it's also very true! In the first stanza, there's a bit here and there where I feel your ...

Hey there! Well, I actually adored this (looking at your revised piece). It has that feel of something I haven't particularly read before and the emotions in it are clear, ...

Hey there! I think the best part of this poem of yours is definately down to the lovely control of punctuation and choice of language. The punctuation makes it flow ...

Hey there! I really liked the mystery of this poem, how things are implied and the way your perfections are brought across yet they're always tamed down by the perceived ...

Hey there Penguin! I don't think you're bad at all! These horses heads have a good basic proportion, there's not any clear mistakes a part from the lack of a ...

Hey there Sarah! Well, what can I say? I think this is actually quite brilliant! The idea is that feel of a natural leadership, of that alpha male on a ...

Hey there! Firstly, unlike the other reviewers have said, I like the idea of rain as an imagery. I think it's excellent. Although there's a lot of rain themed poems ...

Hey there! I love the way you tell this piece, the narration voice is formal yet personal, which is very good in terms of Non-Fiction as it'll allow your audience ...

Hey there! Welcome! The most prominent weakness for this poem, I think, is that it isn't getting the potential fluency and rhythm that I think it could achieve. There are ...

Hey there! The most prominent vibe I get from this poem of yours is from the first stanza. Her hand cups reverent the ivory piece Its shadow large above the ...

Hey there Story! I love the beauty of this poem, mainly due to it’s undeniable simplicity. It feels so original. The best bit is the “ABAB, CDCD” as it sets ...

Hey there! I have to say, the start of this sounded quite lyrical, which is good! It shows that your words (and structure) have a natural pace! The fact that ...

Game on Snoink. ;) England match is on ;) I'll only be able to do about 20 something! :O