BenFranks

Hey there! The first thing I noticed and liked about the poem, whether it be intentional or not, is the way you've structured it. By spacing each line away from ...

This thread is totally pointless, irrelevant and silly, yet it grabs all of YWSer's attention... ...much like Bolt. :)

Hey there! I've got to say, this is not just amusing and sarcastic, it is a brilliant poem in itself too. Apart from odd structural points where lines feel too ...

Done Elinor.

Hey Elinor, here as requested. (: My comments/suggestions/improvements are in green for you. Thomas Pike placed a single red rose on top of the mounds of others which that surrounded ...

Do you think Reg and Riles will get together pre the end of the 4th and then they're the two that go and find the rest of the gang or ...

hey there! In terms of structure, this is one of the best poems I've seen on YWS in a long time. I loved the exploration of emotions and the choice ...

Hey there! Up until the line "Stab me..." your fluency is very well devised through well chosen punctuation and word choice, however from the line "Stab me..." youe fluency is ...

Hey there, This is a very thought provoking poem and naturally one each and every person on YWS can relate to. We all have that heavy conscience of whether or ...

Hey there, I think the most interesting thing about this poem of yours is the topic. In cultural poetry that rebels against something, like you seem to be doing here ...

Done guys. :)

Hey there, as requested: Naturally, I'm going to start with the language. I liked it a lot, it was very flowery, very impressive and very decisively chosen. Although it would ...

Hey there Kyousuke, here as requested. Sorry you've been waiting for this review a while, but I hope it helps all the same. My suggestions, comments and improvements will be ...

Reg Carter It was classic that everytime I went near a door something crazy or dramatic occured and when passing the front doorit was no exception. Riley burst in, a ...

Thanks for your reviews guys, they're always helpful. I shall be focusing your points on the next column I write shortly. I'm always learning after all! (: