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72. Visit England . . . 73. . . . and France . . . 74. . . . and Italy . . . 75. . . . and Ireland ...

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Hullo there! My first thoughts of this piece is that this is definitely one of those influential tales that are invaluable to stumble across. I don't play American football myself, ...

Hey there! Right, firstly, this is quite good in terms of narrative winds and snaps of visualisation thanks to a dandy set of word choicing. However, at the start, the ...

Fimbling fingers turning sideways in their clumsy confusion- handholding really wasn’t so difficult, but I knew that you were flustered-blustered, red-faced and cute with embarrassed words , words,

Hi there Emmy, I have to say before we start that you have a real talent for imagery and word choice. This is one of those poems that is a ...

Hi there, here as you requested. Just a few nitpicks to get started: shouting to from him inside the hollow I believe you meant to write: "shouting to him from ...

Hey there! I have to say, as a Beatles fan, that this story interested me from the word go. It's short and you create a good character base and develop ...

Hey there. First thing I thought when I read this piece was that it started off quite well. You had the subtle descriptions and the senses of overwhelming beauty portrayed ...

Thank you for the reviews chaps and ladies. (:

Minor Strong Language. Dirty Doves Avant-Propos: The Devil's Voice Unknown Date & Location “Go!” It was the last thing I heard that poor bastard yell to me. Go . He ...

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Thanks very much for taking the time to comment, it is much help! ;D Cheers for some inside tips n' bits, MeanMrMustard - much appreciated! ;)

Thanks so much for the reviews Mizzle and Miss Blue, they're very helpful. I shall get around to editing this after I've scratched up a couple more reviews. Mizzle: You ...