BenFranks

Painful Admittance, 2011, Life: Full of truths, Lies and swindles; Good times and bad. A memory built upon the diet of priceless and countless emotions. Reluctance and denial waving their ...

Look forward to it ;)

That's pretty incredible. It's like something out of a Sci-Fi movie...

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All done. (Y)

Hey there, I tell you what I love about you're story: it feels real. I find myself trying to critique, but I'm having second thoughts. When I read this, there's ...

Hey there, - as requested - So I really liked this poem because of the visualisations, the structure and the fluency. Usually I'd punctually rip poetry a part, but you're ...

Hey there Elinor! Here as requested. Review: However , as she lay there, she found herself not being able to drift back into sleep. This feels a little too formal ...

Done and dusted, Night - hope it helped.

Hey there. Just being a little picky, but this line could do with an extra syllable: to the days when we would whisper in the decaying light Perhaps alter the ...

Hey there, The reviewers above me are right about repetition. The structure of this poem merely feels like you've taken a question, decided you're going to ask the same thing, ...

Re-opened.

I genuinely didn't notice this was an acrostic, my fault!

Hey there, I must say that I liked this poem. There is a pretty good balance in terms of punctuation so there's no forced, choppy pace and nor is there ...