BenFranks

Je ne parle pas le francais.

As much as writers dislike doing it, try planning . Go back to basics, what's your beginning? What's your build up? What's their challenge/conflict? What's their resolution? Are you making ...

My short stories... A Poet Once Dead Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 8. Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 56. Letters from my boy John Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 11. Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 5

You're writing in first person. If you're coming at it from the narrative style of a "stream of consciousness" you are alright flicking from past to present as you've done ...

Sometimes you'll end up with some very interesting, multi-layered narratives if you stitch together rather than write "conventionally".

The best way to write lots, as Ky suggests, would be to set-up a blog. You can do that on YWS itself or an independent site such as Wordpress (there's ...

Awhh, all the old dandy friends. :)

Sensitive issues need more time and nurture to form into great poetry, what you have here is the frameworks of an idea. If you want to be subversive to social ...

Good evening, Your main struggle here is the failure to adopt a consistent style. Your formality is a little bewildered, you drift between coloquial-chatting, like the reviewer above me mentioned, ...

Hm, that's hard. There are a lot of movies I really love, but at this point, for me, I'll have to say it's Captain America: The First Avenger . Sure, ...

I pretty much share your views there.

Cameron says, "No." And if he says no, so do the Tory MPs - even if the back-benchers are squealing and squawking for a debate. Even the Euroskeptic William Hague ...

(500) Days of Summer I like Zooey Deschanel in that movie.

Super 8, a film directed by J.J. Abrams and produced by Steven Spielberg. Is Super 8 good? I am eager to see that. for me it's Love Actually (2003) Literally ...

What is the best movie you've ever seen? Why? Let us know! I've personally always been a fan of the 007 film series, Quentin Tarantino movies and The Dark Knight ...