BenFranks

Wow, this was quite gripping in terms of the mystery and dark feel of it. I don't usually take to this type of poetry but I really enjoyed yours and ...

MILK - Milk is an interesting being, infact I struggle to see what I'm seeing it could be described as intriguing. - Actually, no. It couldn't. To describe Milk in ...

Hullo Dem! Would you do me the honour of reviewing an extract from my Non-fiction column-based book? I'd like to know if you enjoyed the humour of it! :D Anyway ...

Hey there! I'm Ben, I haven't read your other parts so excuse any errors I make about plot! :) Anyway my thoughts to your story! Firstly, you have a tense ...

Wow you're a genius of script dialogue! That was incredibly FUNNY The way you've started this is ace: J.K Rowling: This is all your fault, you know. Stephenie Meyer: *whines* ...

Hey there! Welcome to YWS. Anyway, about the poem. I love the shortness of it. It's crisp, to the point, vivid and has a settling rhythm. It's well structured and ...

I enjoyed the poetry about the Critique, but I think you need to perfect the Writer stanzas. Also, like the others I'd suggest posting in black and white, use colours ...

Hey Firestarter! I realise this isn't your most admirable of the genres to critique but I wondered if you'd have a look at my non-fiction extract: This is an extract ...

Hey there! I think you need to work on the first stanza of your poem and bring some more vivid imagery into it and create that grip or emotional effect ...

Hey there! I'm Ben. I love your wolves, the sketching is superb :) my second wolf is the favourite of the two. I think your style and colour experiments are ...

Hello there! I'm Ben :) I love this piece because I think it reflects the title you've given it - or vica-versa. Your original style of the sketchy, broken lines ...

Hello Telle! I think these photos are taken at just the right angles to make the most out of their cuteness, so brilliantly well dones. The personal nit-pick I have ...

Hello! I'm Ben and I'll be giving you a review today :) Lone Wolf Preface Where the black sky touches the white snow I (interesting, but I'm not sure if ...

Thankyou for your thoughts and suggestions. However, after suggesting to me to make this into a 'novel' do you really mean 'cut it down'? Or did you mean spread out ...

Wow, I think this is brilliantly well written! I can't really comment on the technical side of this, as I'm no poet, but image wise you've conveyed vivid images continuously ...