BenFranks

A lot better. Well done. Now that your structure is here we can read this with fluency and you've still maintained that pace. I don't know if you've combatted the ...

Hey there! I enjoyed the narrative voice and pace of this poem but there are some definate improvements you could pick up on: 1. Structure. I think your poem completely ...

Hey there! I have to say the way you've "doodled" the features on this is well crafted indeed! -- that means it's ace . The hair is fantastically well drawn ...

Hey there! I love this and I love CS2! Anyway! Like everyone else has mentioned the hair is absolutely stunning in terms of quality -- it looks a little like ...

I love these, you've shown a real talent in this style of illustration. What I would say for your doodles though, is keep them black and white. You're excellent at ...

I have to say that was a story that came with some big impact. The reaction you got out of me was more the want to shout at the lads ...

Thanks for the tips Dem! And yay! A fellow columnist! *waves* :) Ben.

Hey there! Okay, your poem: This I love: I walk through the evil doors This place is filled with trashy whores. The say high school are your glory years So ...

Hey there! Here as requested :P - Anyway I see this has been nitpicked a lot, so I'll focus on content and development! :) Well what can I say? The ...

Okay done Amy. BondGirl007 I'll get to yours by tomorrow morning I promise, just had a busy day! Any'oo keep posting your requests...

Yello Amy! :P Here as requested :) Any'oo, I'm not too good at poetry myself, but I'll give you an idea of what I think! XD Silence envelopes the music, ...

Okay, I'm on it! Anyone else?

Thanks for the great and positive feedback JSPike! :D Ben.

Haha, glad your enjoying it! & thankyou for the review! Ben.

Thanks for the review Amy! :D