BenFranks

Thankyou for the positive feedback!

Sure, I'll get onto it! :P - Finished your review Bondgirl007 by the way! Anyone else?

Hey there! If I'm honest when i first saw this poem and read the first two lines I though, "oh dear." However the way you've ended this poem makes the ...

Hey there! Can you do me a favour and review this: Earth And It's Contents: The Problem With It Is. (Extract from my book.) Can you give me some thoughts ...

Hey again! Another short, sweet gem of writing you have here! The structure and flow of your poetry is always a crowd pleaser and it doesn't let us down here. ...

Thankyou! :D

Hey there! The feature shading on this wolf and the background is very well-done indeed like your school friends said. I think the wolf's emotion is serious and angry, yet ...

Hey again Telle! Obviously the best part of this has got to be the message. It's fantastic! I hope you made that up yourself because it has a huge punch ...

Aw, thanks alot guys! I thought it was another disaster :P I'll try and revise then edit the use of 'why' but I'm glad you liked it! XD Ben.

Hey! My favourite thing abou this poem is the shortness which adds to the effect and impact, it's almost as if you haven't got long to tell us but you're ...

Thankyou so much for the feedback.

Why thankyou for the positive feedback Matt! Ben.

Wow, Durrie. What can I say? The features of shading and your talent in illustration here are beautiful, this basically flawless. I suppose the only real improvement anyone could suggest ...

BREAKFAST I came down for breakie one mornin' in May, and to my surprise I saw m'kids were out to play. There was Sally with her spade and li'l Mickey ...

Hey there Amy! Me again! XD Right, this piece has already been nit-picked and pulled apart but feel free to extend on this if you see anything because its important ...