BenFranks

Haha, thankyou and thanks for the feedback! Ben,

RSVP for Revision avoidance XD! :)

Welcome to YWS! It isn't so bad, infact its motivating! You get the odd harsh review but they all help improve the writing. You'll go far on this site! Its ...

Beautiful & Individual 'Nough said. Ben.

Hey there! To start: Thanks for the good read! Its very original, so well done! I can't nitpick this because I was drawn in by it. Your poetry is so ...

Unfortunately this is a touch messy, but my biggest issue is your beginning: Love is a knife straight through your heart. God I've never felt so much pain! Love is ...

Hey there! I love the pace and feel to this poem. I think you've started it stunningly well. It's captivating and sets off a fluent rhythm: Trapped in this box, ...

Hey there fixed! I was just searching through the old Art&Photography when I came across this GEM of work! What can I say? Oh my lord! You have to teach ...

Okay, this is persuasive which is a pluspoint, I guess. What I would say is you need to watch some sentences such as this: If I can get into a ...

I love the originality of some of these and the only nitpick I can really offer is some of them don't have the strength in the lines. Without that line ...

Hey there, welcome to YWS! The shortness is not a problem with this poem because it conveys the effect and meaning it should . Every line is a beautifully implicit, ...

Hey there! I really liked this. The lines are strong and make the image vivid and seal the effect. My favourite thing is this setting, the silhouettes semms so natural ...

Hey there! *Likes*

Not my cup of tea. Although well-written and well-structured, it clearly made some people laugh so I guess it's a success. Personally I just didn't find any effect to it. ...

Right'o Daydeams, I'll get on it. Keep posting requests people!