BenFranks

Hey there! Welcome :) and I too, enjoy the smell of baking bread :) Mmm.. Anyway! Have fun here! Ben.

Pizza or pasta?: Definately Pasta, JD. Hello! Welcome to YWS. We're all mega friendly, close and always willing to help. I've only been here two weeks and look, I'm already ...

Hey and welcome to YWS! We're all friendly here and we'd all be happy to help you with your poetry! Infact I adore reading and reviewing it so if you ...

Welcome to YWS (:

Anyone else have any thoughts? I'm very experimental with poetry since it's not exactly "My thing". Infact I do my best to avoid writing it (as much as I love ...

I'd just write something else. Then in a year you might come back to it. I have the problem of not finishing, you just need to find that story with ...

Hey everyone! This may seem a little cynical, but in my Reg Carter fictional spy series, I need to kill off Carter - who is apparently the favourite amongst readers. ...

'Ullo Pink! Unfortunately, to your despair, I've come anlong with another request for a bit'a humourus non-fiction. (In a slightly different context than before). Okay, so this is a piece ...

Extract from the "Preface". Earth & its Contents THE DICTIONARY Note: Contains Mildly Strong Language (Okay, before you go, “Oh dear, why on earth would I want to read a ...

Hey there! Okay, my favourite and most enjoyable thing about this poem was the structure. I love how you've kept the lines short. It creates a kind of unique pace ...

By the way, I've posted the new extract :)

--> Hello again. Okay I prefer this one to your otherone because I can feel some vague emotion trailing through but once again you lack the effect. Its badly written ...

Hey there Percy, Let's start with a couple of punctuation and type errors to improve the fluency of the read: I will survive. I will surv i ve through these ...

Hello lildeh! The length of this poem is just right in my opinion. I think there's a nitpick with the tone of it, however. This is opinion based so it ...

Hey! @JSPike : Thanks so much for the positive feedback and I can see what your saying, there is a bit of 'blah blah' in the middle, so I'll get ...