BenFranks

Hey there! Okay, I enjoyed the colour of vocab you've got here! It really delivers some effect. The main nitpick I have with it is in terms of fluency. I ...

Hey there! What I like about this piece of poetry is the chosen vocabulary and the effect of it. I think you're also structured it very well. My biggest problem ...

Hey there, Welcome to YWS. Firstly, I enjoyed the originality of your poem and the images were okay - always rooms for improvement - but 'least they delivered some effect. ...

Fantasy's like water. It comes in different forms, but they're easily understandable once you behold the knowledge . :)

Strange things aren't strange in strange books. It could also depend on what you define as "strange". I mean, what if your definition of strange was strange ? Philosophy's too ...

My day was immense. I'm no longer single :) haha! Ben,

I'm not mentioned, I'm from Salisbury, Wiltshire. Guess we're not too YWS popular here! :D Swindon looks surprisingly popular though, considering little things occur in such a place :D Lol! ...

I've read Boyle's book. It's rude and naive, in my opinion. I mean he's one of my favourite comedians, but that book is badly written and it's completely unnecessary in ...

Welcome to YWS! I'm Ben, nice to meet you. I enjoyed the difference of this poem, but you need to avoid ALL chatpeak and punctuate a lot better. Vary sentence ...

Anytime. Oo, i forgot to "Likes" this. *Likes* :D Ben

Hey there! Welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy it here! Anyway, I found this was truly original with bags of effect and imagery from start to end. Close your ...

Hello Incognito! Right, as for this wonderful, feature-stunning piece of realism! - Proportions Okay, as an artist myself, I do realise that these are very hard to perfect. I have ...

I enjoyed the originality, unfortunately I can't currently nitpick since I need to go & see to my Physics. I'll be back! Ben.

Hey there! This writing is well-structured if you're nine years old . The biggest problem I have with this is your naivity. This means you haven't really covered all arguments. ...

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