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Re: Tick Tock
Hey there! Like Matt said there's a strong reliance on font and colour. However in my opinion this is good. I think this shows a take of your own poetry. ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Another Manga
Hey just a little advice: I've noticed that you mention you've copied your works on some of your posts in Manga. What I think you should do is get some ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Guess Who! (PG?)
Hey Jenna, Just a little pop of feedback as everyones mentioned any advice I might've laid on! xD So, I like the strength of the outline and I think the ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Snow
Hey there! These are some wonderful snapshots, I especially admire the angles. I think my favourite thing about them is the ones you took in Oxford! I think this was ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Suicide Note Of The Weak
Hey there! My favourite thing about this poem is the choice of language; that's what really crafts the originality to this. From this the effect is much more powerful and ...
Jan 31, 2010 -
Re: Christmas Day 1914
Hi. That was different, I'll grant you that. Keep up the writing. Ben
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: I'm dreaming of a world
Hey there! ~ I'm dreaming of a white christmas... Anyway! I like the "I'm dreaming... Where... Where... And..." Pattern it's individual and kind of catchy :) Here's just a few ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Poison
Hey! Thumbs up for the structuring of this poem. There's some real originality here. I'd improve this by revising the fluency and perhaps sprucing up the language in some parts. ...
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: (E&iC) Dictionary [Part One]
Cheers for the feedback Pike :D
Jan 30, 2010 -
Re: Just a bit of fun! (Mangos!)
Nice one! Scores on edited opening post. Anyway, keep posting people!
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Winter is a Live Mind
Hey there Rose! Punctuation Okay, the prior thing I notice when I read this is that there's only really full stops, so I think there's a small lack of rhythm ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Woes Behind Curtains
Hullo! We don't really need an introduction, I've reviewed your lovely poetry before! :D Anyway. Punctuation This is well thought out and I don't have any problem with your fluency ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: hello everyone
Hello Awesome person! :) I'm always here if you need a review xD --> Also, if you want a good laugh, just drop me a PM! :) Have a quality ...
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Poem(s)?
Brilliant Ed. Keep up the good poetry :) Ben
Jan 29, 2010 -
Re: Just a bit of fun! (Mangos!)
This was PMed by callmeLily73 : I had a weird dream last night! It was a 50 foot mango! It had bunny ears and a french mustash!It chased me all ...
Jan 29, 2010