BenFranks

Hey there. - Love the colours - Love the originality - Not sure about the face, but hey, it's the clothes design we're looking at! XD - My favourite thing ...

Hey there, Erm, first thoughts? Brilliant message! The imagery is obviously simplistic but it works really well, so your conveying the message to full affect. I especially liked the involvement ...

Hey there, This was an interesting poem and somewhat emotional as shown by your choices in language. Excusing the odd typo, there is something that I don't really find I ...

Hey Halycon! My favourite thing about this poem is your admirable use of varying line length. It makes the rhythm very quite individual in a sense and also helps me ...

Hey BigM, I think your problem here is structuring the poetry, because the rhythm I interpret and the images you portray are very well written. What you should do, like ...

Hi there, I enjoyed the beginning to this story and happen to admire small little tales such as these, however you need to be careful that although they're true , ...

Hey there anonymoussoul7, welcome to YWS. Anyway, your poetry is one of those rare gems that has both a perfect rhythm and a confident and sustained portrayal of images and ...

Thanks for the feedback guys, :)

what happened to dedicated story bookers? This is really unactive :(

Reg Carter We reached the room with Mitch and Bree in and I looked scarcely at the doctor, who exited the room quickly in a dry fear. "Silly bastard," I ...

THankyou for feeding back Amy :)

Thanks for the feedback :)

Thanks Pink :)

Lol, I youtubed them and that was funny :) what'a act.

Lol, we'll be making a sequel somewhen xD