BenFranks

DT: This is a storybook for all you comedians out there! Yep! I'm on about you ! What? Yes of course you , huh? Aw, you joker you! Anyway, this ...

Wow! Your idea here is truly stunning. I'm really, really glad I noticed this piece. The fact that the surroundings are all black and white draws us all relentlessly to ...

For me, poetry isn't meant to be a week long thing... it's a spur of the moment piece of literature.

Hey there! Those Eyes Firstly, this line didn't fit into the poem really: Oozing blood relentlessly I think it lacked affect, relevance and imagery, so you may want to rethink ...

Hey fixed! This was one of those poems where I click on it to review it and end up just being drawn into a pool of the author's mind, crafting ...

Hey there! Unlike Matt mentioned, your first stanza - in my opinion - was beautifully original; and I mean this in a rhythmic sense. It was so enticing! I absolutely ...

Hey there! Unfortunately, I found this poem a little uncomforting to be reading because you're lines are so short ~ which isn't necessarily a bad thing ~ but here it ...

Hey there! Okay, Matt's covered everything exactly as I would've nitpicked it, I definately second him with the grammar changes being this: Little girl, with your quiet, weeping eyes, Don't ...

Lmao :)

Thankyou!

The crying one, lol.

Thankyou!

Thankyou Hope! :)

Hey there Mo.! I adore the eyes to start off with and the shoulder that bumps up. You also have a real talent for feature defining and shading to tone ...

Hey there! This is one of those interesting pieces of photography where it really depends on each individual interpretation, because at the end of the day what you have here ...