Bella

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Bella "Make sure you bring a way out then," I said, nodding. "I don't wanna come." "What're you gonna do then?" "I'm going to go home and sleep. And then ...

Anney Dammit! I thought angrily. Edward was still just as much of an ass as he had always been. He had me change clothes, and I was now seated at ...

Ronan I kissed her back lightly, grinning. "Come on, let's get outta here; this place gives me the creeps." I took her hand, pulling her through the front door. Bella ...

Leslia I nodded, knowing he was right. It was none of my business anyway. Balior was coming into view already, although we still had a bit of travel left. >.< ...

Haha. Funny stuff! ^_^

Anney I yawned, stretching out on the old matress. A strange scent crossed my nose. "Edward." I had barely said his name when his arms were around me, holding me ...

Oi Vey. I just stretched the forum again. Stupid oversized pictures that I keep trying to avoid. I'm really really sorry! >.

OE you look so adorabible with your daddy! I gotsta new hat!!! ^_^ My mouth looks stupid in that though. -.- I also has a duck! ~Bella Bambina~

Anney I walked along the street, hoping I'd make it back to one of the decent abandoned buildings before the sun got too high. As the first rays hit me, ...

Leslia It can't hurt, can it? To accompany this man for a period of time? I decided no harm could come of it. "Sure, I'll be glad for the company," ...

Heya! I really liked this, especially the way you (as the title suggested) flashed back from present time to small chunks of memories. I think it added to the story ...

So, I liked this, to some extent. I won't repeat what Cade said, so it leaves me with not so much to say. There was, however, one line that really ...

Hmm... I like the poem itself. Your wording is wonderful, so I really like that. My only suggestion would be to work on the flow. I had some trouble reading ...

**Kinda lame...but lame is fun! ^.^ Although...then we'd need a reason for the werewolves to capture her... what about vampires? Perhaps the vampire the originally changed her? He's mad because ...