Bella

Wow, I loved this! I had a pretty hard time just reading it and giving a good crit though, because a lot of things I noticed were more nitpicky things. ...

>>Via, I don't mind in the least. :) And I'm assuming you won't mind either, even though I won't do anything really. ^.^ [but if I do something y'don't like, ...

I just realized that I didn't put Evan in a bad mood and I'm really not sure why he's in a bad mood....*shrug* I love how characters take over sometimes. ...

Haha, andimlovegalore, I think you're doing a fine job! Some characters just have more things happening than others, so the writer gets to write more. And some people aren't very ...

Isabella Milan I smiled, seating myself beside Daniel and biting into the hamburger he had insisted on buying for me. He watched me for a moment before taking a bite ...

So, I couldn't really think of a better place to post this either. A form of art not widely shared on this site is video, so when I make a ...

I thought it was just a hoodie, in which case it would keep you warm while you read the stuff underneath it??? *isn't sure* ~Bella~

Frube!! Kokobeans taught me that word. Frube is actually what they call yogurt tubes, like gogurt and what not, but they also use it as a jokingly insulting term. He ...

**Hey, I'm sorry if I sounded at all rude in my above post. I didn't mean to sound rude or mean or anything, I just wanted to make my opinion/thought/thing ...

Sorry I didn't post my miny rant type thing here - I kinda forgot. So, here's what I've got for relationship status type things for my characters, just to make ...

I know you can Via, but no body does. I know a lot of senior members, or even just the members who are talented and well known in the storybook ...

**Okay, so our timing is pretty much completely off. Everyone is doing something without really paying attention to other things. I can understand the little things, like mistaking someone for ...

**Oh, I have an idea Heather!!* Isabella Milan - Neurosurgery I slipped into my patients room, excited to see how the surgery had gone. As I pulled back the curtain ...

**Thanks a bunch Max!** Evan Kensington I ignored her attitude, noticing the problem immediately. I hadn't been the one to finish her surgery - I'd helped her get everything settled, ...

Hello YWS! I couldn't think of a better place to post this. I just thought of a few tips for storybook writers, and I was really proud of them, and ...