Bella

8/10 because it was just somewhat amusing to read.

(Sorry Hiro, I'm sick of waiting for you, so I'm adding on myself as you're character, Kaige. This way we'll all be on about the same page, then you can ...

"If he wanted me, he would've said so. He said he wanted you, henceforth he wants YOU! not me, YOU! Dreams mean nothing." Kevin grabbed her by the shoulders and ...

2 questions: 1) Do you have an agent? 2) same as above, because I do not see your response. How did you get a publisher? I think it's great that ...

(Hiro, I think you're confused. We're out of the tavern and your stomach has been healed, so WTH are you talking about? When you figure it out, please add on.)

I believe in eating chocolate. I do NOT believe that it gives you pimples, or is unhealthy. -Jackie *What was your favorite toy when you were little?*

granted, but the bubble gum you have is abc gum, and tastes unbelievably nasty. Also, you fall asleep with it in your mouth and choke on it. Ouch, sorry. *I ...

my little brother...or wait, it's a tie between him and the inbeciles that go to my school ~jackie~ *Why do you like the kind of music you do like?*

I agree with Ofour, your wording could use A LOT of help. I had to reread some sentences four or five times before I understood what you were trying to ...

8/10 because you don't need a statue to be a great person.

In fact, she slept so well that when she finally woke up the school bus had come and gone, and her mom had left for work. Alexx quickly threw on ...

For some reason each drawing came out the same: a dark figure sitting in a corner; the cat in some cases, a human form in others. "GET OUT OF MY ...

10/10 I love that.

i like the fact that it's still dark at 6:30 in the morning when I get up. That's the best part of DST...during the winter I wake up to light ...

7/10, because I disagree to some extent.