Bella

**I hope this is ok, I didn't really know what else to do** "Whoa, look at this!" Martin exclaimed as the paper shot across the room and stuck in the ...

*Alice, where are you?* Bella had turned off the autopilot and put the ship in a form of stall, so they were just floating there. Alice didn't answer. *Adam, are ...

oh, i want Martin! Wait...wouldn't that leave um...person who just added profile...with their own character. (Sorry, i forgot your name person! oops)

**Mad, get over it. It's not our fault you weren't here, it's a storybook. As you said, there will be twists and turns and things will happen that you won't ...

"Oh my great goddess...did you see that?" Alles asked Ileria excitedly. "They were...the...elves!" "I know, dear, I know. And now they're inside the once-again-unconcious Emily," Ileria answered quiet

"NOO!!!!!!!!" BElla cried, runnign forward and into the holding field. "Dammit Adam, do something!" "I can't, there's nothing that can be done," Adam asnwered quietly. Jay laughed wickedly from where ...

"Her auro is a funny color right now...I don't have a name for it exactly. It's almost...clear." Ileria noted, her voice barely audible. "What does that mean?" Rick asked worriedly. ...

Bella carefully landed teh shuttle in the docking area of the Highwind and opened the door. Alice was the first one out, walking quickly. Rick was right behind her. "Alice, ...

"So when do you think she'll be back?" Owen asked. Alexx walked back to Matt's room and put him in his crib. "As soon as she can manage, most liekly," ...

I didn't notice any mistakes or anything, and you're writing is...aluring? For lack of a better word. I don't know the plot, but I like these 2 chapters.

woah...it's shiney!! That is so awesome Adam...*wishes she was computer talented like Adam*

"Roya," Bella said quietly, turning away from the screen where Adam was. "CALM DOWN! And aren't you supposed to be on the Highwind?" "I dunno. I came here and...yeah, here ...

I don't like roller coasters, but my dad talked me into going on the same thing in the OH six broke down while we were waiting in line. This is ...

hmm...this is interesting, for lack of a better word. What does "Je ne sais quoi" mean? You have a wide vocabulary, but some of this is hard to understand, in ...

OH OH MINE!!! *Calls dibs on Tasslehoff.* MINE!