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Re: Anethandez Adventure
***Sorry I haven't posted much, our computer got a virus, and we haven't had internet for weeks. I'll try to post as much as I can now. Please keep my ...
Sep 1, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
((((I won't be posting much...ask Alice...wait no, i'll tell. My comp has a virus...whatever Alice says is a lie...)))) *Alice, can you hear me?* Bella was sitting in her room ...
Aug 21, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter
"Of course not!" Sarabella said, smiling brightly. "We wouldn't mind at all. Meet us at the front door after dinner, ok?" "Sure!" Adam said, seemign a little more confident as ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
"I'll go help too," Bella said at once. Nat gave her a wary look; he didn't know about her new-found talent yet. "No, Bella, it's dangerous. Last time I checked, ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Folded Page of a Dream
I liked it. I know, that sounds like an absolutely horrid crit (the kind that would get kitties eaten...lol, sorry) But I honestly loved this. I wouldn't change the wording ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Cliched Romance
I haven't read much of your work, so I can't compare it to your other stuff, but I didn't think it was really bad, nor absolutely wonderful. It didn't seem ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Harry Potter
"Hey, did you hear?" Sarabella said suddenly, remembering the exciting thing she had read. "Hear what?" the others asked. "There's going to be a huge meteore shower tonight; from what ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Writing in the Dark
I really like the idea...or plot, for lack of a better word. I think it has a lot of potential; but, as something euclidean said, this is the usual take ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
"Come on," Nat instructed, dragging Bella back towards his house. "The spectral can find me no matter where I go. We need to get back to the others." "Oh my ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Usergroup Wars: Return to YWS
Bella nodded, unsure of how to reply. "Thank you," she said at last. She felt that it was time for her to leave, so she did. Adam was waiting for ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
Bella looked down at her arms unhappily..."Does this count as a reason for revenge?" she asked. "This hurts like Helk." "Helk?" "Yeah, that's my way of saying Hell without cussing." ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Bella followed Nat in silence; for some reason, his silences were rarely, if ever, awkward. The walk back to the inn was short. Nat held the door open for her, ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Usergroup Wars: Return to YWS
Adam walked out and looked at Bella. "He said to send you in," he said quietly. "Make sure you address him as 'sir', don't spazz on him, he won't like ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: Chat room adventures
"What do you need a long-range teleporter for, Matt?" Bella asked, trying to reach into his mind as she asked. All she got was elevator music (haha). "Um...well..." she knew ...
Aug 17, 2007 -
Re: School of Crazy and Weird People
"She's really good..." Luna agreed, still slightly shocked. Not only was she shocked by Nancy's amazing trick, but also by the Jack, and the way he acted towards her. Never ...
Aug 17, 2007
