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Re: My love
I agree with Rigel, you certainly wanted to write a silly poem. Silly poems are really great, (just look at Shel Silverstein), But they still need to make some sense. ...
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Re: Night Me
Hmm...I liked this at the beginning, but about half way through the first part (Glitter?) it seemed to get really, as Evangelina said, repeatative. I liked the general concept, but ...
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Re: The Murdered and The Murderer
Death came swiftly That Midsummer’s night; I doubt the young girl Could put up much fight. A sick minded murderer, A cold hearted man, To steal a girl’s life Just ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Bella nodded to show that she agreed. Together, she and Nat walked down the tunnel, aided only by the light of Nat's staff. "How will we know what this stone ...
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Re: The New and Improved Twisted and Completely Out There Story
Alexx's hands were soaked, as was her shirt, in her brother's blood. Owen walked towards her slowly, giving her her moment to just let it all out. "Alexx...honey," he whispered, ...
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Re: Harry Potter
"Adam, don't," Sara warned quietly, pulling Adam closer to her. "Why not? It's my fault, I ought to do what I can to help," Adam protested. "No; you're not strong ...
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Re: Revolution
I loved the idea of it; it's almost like a sick obsession type of love...a lot of the guys at school bug me about how I can't do anything because ...
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Re: Zip
Bella was so infuriated by the sudden amount of arguing going on around her. Orion wasn't the problem; she understood that centaurs considered the forest they lived in to belong ...
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Re: The New and Improved Twisted and Completely Out There Story
"Peter," Alexx's voice was barely even a whisper as they walked closer to him. Owen held Alexx's left hand tightly, as to keep her from running to her brother, and ...
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Re: How To Make Your Own Official Poll
I just had a totally random thing. Pat Buchanan is the answer to everything, as is 42. and right now, as I type this, 42 people who have voted have ...
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Re: Zip
"What's that?" Krysi screamed the moment the large, hairy beast swung into view. Bella had heard it coming, and was totally prepared. She had taken the shape of a dragon ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Bella was still mad at Nat, and really wanted to keep it that way; but everytime she saw his face, or heard his voice, it got harder and harder. She ...
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Re: Chat room adventures
After talking for a while, and coming to no definite conclusion, Bella stopped speaking to Alice and turned her attention back to Chris. "Well?" he asked curiously, having missed the ...
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Re: Usergroup Wars: Return to YWS
"Adam, you never told me about all this," Bella muttered, looking over at him curiously. He looked from Bella to Adelaide, and back again. "Who told us about SPEW waging ...
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Re: Harry Potter
"It's not very bright to just point that wand at anything and everything, ya know," Sara pointed out nonchalantly as they walked along. She was doing her very best to ...
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