Bella

Well, I think using questions in a poem can turn out really great, depending on how you do it. There wasn't much depth, and I felt no emotion at all ...

Bella followed Adam closely, her sword at the ready. Adam didn't talk much, and Bella had the feeling it had something to do with the fact that it was him, ...

"I really wish we would have thought of that earlier," Luna commented as Julia opened the door and let the group into the next room. "Me too," Warren agreed, looking ...

This sounds interesting, I like it. Can I be Path? Also, what's the general storyline?

"Hello?" Bella asked, looking around her as the fog in her mind cleared. She thought back, trying to remember what had happened. NAT! Was he alright? She couldn't remember. She ...

This didn't grab my attention right away, which isn't a good thing. If it doesn't grab my attention, I usually won't read all of it. Anywho, the first thing I ...

Sara went up to the Gryffindor dorm and changed into her dress. The satin purple material slimmed her figure, and she examined herself in the mirror happily. She had no ...

Alice and I discussed this over the phone earlier today! If we don't have a big gathering like this, than she and I, along with my boyfriend, and a few ...

Bella could read the question on Slade's face. "Apparently yes, although I can't imagine why. I'm still stuck between whether I really want to stay with them or not..." Bella ...

*Thanks DM!!* "NAT!" Bella cried, kneeling beside him instinctively. She placed two fingers on his neck, and could feel his pulse beating slowly. He was alive; good. Bella turned around ...

"We can't just go ask him for it?" Warren suggested, watching Luna pace the room as she thought. "Go ahead and try that Warren; but try not to get burnt." ...

"We'll report back here in a week," Bella added, trying to help the situation as much as she could. "Well..." Adelaide pondered this idea for a moment. "That sounds like ...

"But...Matthius won't be affected by this at all, right?" "Nope. After I finish helping you, Matthius will go back to just as he should be, and won't remember a thing. ...

I liked the first one better, but this one was good too. I think it would make a bit more sense if you put both of them together, as i ...

I like it, although it's rather short. I'm going to go look at Part Two, but why couldn't it be added to this? (Yeah, I'm repeating Sassy) It does sound ...