Bella

OMG! Twisted is...dying!!! EEP! *passes out* We must plot this better.

Name~ Bella(of course) Race~ Vampire(of course) Age~ Looks 16 Orientation~ guys...one in particular(see below) Eyes~ Violet(redder depending on mood) Hair~ black, with violet tips. Grown long(past wai

Bella was glad to know that Nat would live. She sat down at the edge of his bed in the room they were staying in. "Gerard," she said quietly, looking ...

Your rhythm wasn't very strong, nor were you rhymes(sp?), but that can be okay sometimes. I thought it sounded more like a song verse than a poem stanza. Granted poems ...

Honestly, my favorite part is the last half. The first two stanzas were all right, but the last two just really hit something. The first two don't seem to be ...

This seems very...cliched to me. Heartbreak, death and roses are overused in teh same category. It also doesn't flow so well. I have no suggestions on how to fix that ...

So this is a free form poem, correct? If it doesn't need rhythm or anything. That's great, I love free form. But yours was pretty choppy. I'd suggest thinking out ...

I like this. It's very loud, and out there, well still being enjoyable and making some sense. The ending was one that made me smile too, which is always nice. ...

Sara grinned, leaning against the wall while watching Adam walk quickly away from the Griffindor portrait. She was lovestruck for the first time in her life, and practically walking on ...

Bella had been in her room, taking a shower, when she heard the commotion from the deck. She quickly threw on a pair of jeans and a t-shirt, grabbing her ...

Bella was terrified as she walked along side Gerard. She could feel Saylr's thoughts, none of which were pleasant toward her. He thought she ought to take the test. It ...

"That's horrible!" Bella exclaimed, looking down at Nat's face. Even in unconciousness, his pain was clearly visible. "I was there with him when he took it," Nat continued. "The test ...

Bella ignored Gerards thoughts, trying not to read his mind automatically. He was foolish, thinking she couldn't just look in if she trully wanted to. Of course she trully wanted ...

***I'm back!!! I was grounded, or I would've posted sooner!*** "Heather, Help me!!!" Bella cried, trying to find a way to stop the burning on her fighter. She noticed all ...

Bella looked around. She had entered one of Gerards darker memories. She was in a forest, dark and eery. The trees around her looked dead, apart from the thick array ...