Bella

Name - Isabella Cortez Gender - Female Age - 17 Appearance - Ship - Syren - Crew Member, but wants to work her way up. Personality - Isabella sometimes seems ...

I wanted to start off by saying that I like this piece, and I think it has a lot of potential. But I can't find the emotion in it. To ...

I'm impressed! Judging from personal experience, I feel like you've done a wonderful job capturing the (sadly disillusioned) mind of an abuser. My eyes gaze down at your body. Broken, ...

**Also, I meant to note that I wasn't suggesting you fill your poem up with ___ these things. Underscores? Yeah, anyway, that was just because YWS wasn't letting me put ...

Hi there! I'm Bella and I'm here to review your poem! =) I'm going to make a few suggestions and comments, and then apply them to the poem (at least, ...

Hello there! I'm Bella, and I'm here to review your poem! I hope that's okay =) I'd like to start with the title - it should be grateful . Now, ...

I read through this piece a few times before deciding that I really just don't feel it. I don't feel the emotion in it. It's like...the victim of a rape ...

If you're gonna put her in Alg II, it should coincide with Abby and Jazz's Alg II. That way we have more character interactions. So, maybe switch AP and Alg ...

A few notes on schedules: Try to be consistent with room numbers and courses. Art classes are in A rooms, Music classes in M rooms, and that's all I've though ...

Jazz - Tuesday - Class I scamper down the stairs, messenger bag slung over my shoulder, weighed down with a tin of prismacolors, some paints, and multiple pencils. Three sketchpads ...

Jazz - Tuesday I smiled, a real one this time. He thought I was pretty. Not that I didn't, it just wasn't a common compliment. And something about the way ...

Jazz - Tuesday The way Jude's cheeks had colored, turning a bright red at the suggestion of us as a couple, made me smile. But at the same time, as ...

Jazz - Tuesday I smile, standing up while I answer. "I do my best," I laugh, setting my sketchpad on the table, then pushing it toward him to invite him ...

To help the story book regroup, I've decided to start a new day. The day after we all arrived, and met our roommates, and everything. Hopefully it will help get ...

**I'm going to write an actual post, but these are a few comments/sidenotes I've gathered while reading** 1. We need to slow down a bit, so everyone is going on ...