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Re: Be You
Bella~ I rolled my eyes, sighing loudly. "I've been here for WAY too long. Since before I even went to school," I replied. "It's not bad here though ,really. You ...
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Re: Dark Beginings
Bella~ "Why did you come back?" I asked, suddenly realizing that he didn't ahve to come back. Considering his character when he had met me, I would've expected otherwise. Rask ...
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Re: The Random Vampire Story [1]
Bella~ I cried into James chest, wishing for the tears to stop. Curse my emotions, always showing more than I wanted them to! I leaned back, looking James in the ...
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Re: Dark Beginings
Bella~ I nodded, knowing that he had a good idea there. "What about the others....the orc and kender?" I asked, picking at what was left of my meal. "What about ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Valentina~ "Okay," I agreed, sitting on the bed. He sat next to me, putting an arm around me. "What more is there to talk about?" "Well, for starters, do you ...
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Re: Be You
Bella~ I chuckled, examining the new girl. She was a little shy, I think. It looked that way at least. "What's your name?" I asked, biting into the sandwich and ...
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Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Valentina~ I got up, following Natan out into my living room. He was still murmuring his apology. "There's no need to apologize to me," I said quietly. "I know I'm ...
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Re: 5 Tips for Realistic Characters
I found this...very helpful. That period of ellipses was the time in which I saved it in my favorites, so I could go back and check it out later. Bravo ...
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Re: Be You
Bella~ I walked into the lunchroom, bagged lunch in hand. I was one of hte few kids who still brought sandwiches in brown-paper bags, and stuff like that. At least ...
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Re: The Random Vampire Story [1]
Bella~ I led the group into the kitchen, pushing a cabinet out of my way easily. Behind it was, as cliched as this sounds, a secret stairwell. As everyone filed ...
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Re: Tell me
Lindsay, I loved this! It was, in my opinion, something that anyone could relate to. You're poetry tends to be like this though, so I shouldn't expect anything else. *smile* ...
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Re: Night
I thought this was pretty good, but not great. Twas rather hard to understand, and I stumbled over the words a lot. I found that some sentences really didn't fit ...
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Re: The YWS Yearbook '07
Grah! Only one post? Tis not enough! *plans on writing a lot, but will also probably forget half of it within the next five seconds*. First of all~~~ HAPPY NEW ...
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Re: Anything Goes
**This is back tracking a bit, because I missed a decent amount** Bella~ My fingertips continued to glow, and I slowly walked backward, until I was behind Nic. Then I ...
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Re: Dark Beginnings DT
~Bella the Mage~ I don't know about Maybe, (Rask the Drow Elf) but I think it would be fun if she and I tried to stop you guys. Not so ...
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