Bella

Bella~ After a moment of Kida staring at me, I spoke. "What?" I asked, trying to keep my voice smooth and adorable. "You...look different," he answered after a moment. "I ...

Valentina~ Ignoring Natan's plea, I found the demon. Riley was attacking it, Arianna was...where was she? I couldn't see her, and wasn't sure what had happened. Everything seemed to be ...

**YAY! UNDEADNESS!!! HUGS FOR KOKO!!** Sarabella~ Suddenly we were all rushing toward our common rooms. First years were nervously murmuring to each other, while the older kids pretended to stay ...

Hehe, I found it amusing, as logn as I ignored the whole THIS IS FROM TWILIGHT thing...other than that, I loved it. I turned off my obsession...teehee. ~Bella~

"But I already have a boyfriend!" ~ MELANIA "Hypethetically speaking then," ~ Question Asker "No, there's nothing to be hypathetical about!" ~MELANIA "...." ~Question Asker What wuold you do with ...

Bella laughed, handing Heather a glass of milk. "Better?" she asked, stealing a cookie. "Yes, but you just took the best cookie!!" "How do you know it's the best?" "Because ...

Valentina~ I inhaled deeply the moment Riley shouted. "Ugh," I coughed, the smell wasn't as appetizing as it had been the first time. "What is it?" Natan asked, looking over ...

I think this is a fairly good idea, and won't effect the people who critique regularly. I am somewhat worried that people won't post as much of their work though...like ...

((I don't really know where I am....again....)) Bella~ I stood next to the Avian, Kida, watching the battle in silence and feeling very awkward. While I stood there, my glamour ...

I really liked this -- its a sonnet, correct? I just wrote one of those! (is excited). I thought it was interesting, because you usually don't hear poetry from the ...

***I wrote this poem for my boyfriend, and now I'm thinking about entering it into a HUGE school-wide contest. As a freshman, it would be totally awesome to win, so ...

9/10 I love it...I don't know why, but I love it!

Bella~ I looked around the room at all the other people. Experiments, that's all we were. Experiments and oddities. Why we were in this room, none of us knew. All ...

6/10 I liked the reference to smoking being bad, because my opinion on smoking is very not nice, but all in all your signature kinda confuseded me.

9/10 That gave me one good laugh!!!