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Re: Lunch Time
Well, Suzanne dear, that was certainly interesting. Honestly, as disturbing as it may have been, I liked it. My only suggestion is to, perhaps, fiddle with it a bit -- ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: cold black heart
My life poem Who am I? Who are you? I'm a nobody in a somebody town Who are you? Who am I? A small speck in a billion dots Are ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: Valentine's Day Sucks: 6/6
I really wish I could give some advice, but I've got none. I really loved these -- I just read all six of them in about ten minutes, because I ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: One Night, One Chance
The clock strikes midnight, and he doesn’t seem to care or notice. Unless it prompted him to do what he did next . He grabbed me into my arms and ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: Chat room adventures
We're not screwed , Bella argued mentally. Maybe there's some extra that we missed? "Let's check the insides," Alice said, using Bella's idea aloud. Bella grinned, opening the door to ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
Valentina~ I walked alongside Natan, hoping that if anything were to happen, I would be able to help. I knew I could grab him if necessary, until Isabella could calm ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: Chat room adventures
"Or...we think we know," Bella added. "And that's good enough," Alice said. "Do you always finish each others thoughts?" Alice and Bella looked at each other and laughed. "Yes." "We." ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: Chat room adventures
Bella grinned and began looking from engine to engine. "So...this thing here looks really dirty. I think that means it needs changed, eh?" "Sounds good to me," Alice agreed. "This ...
Jan 25, 2008 -
Re: Autumn's Beginning, Autumn's Breeze
(Well then make him think!!!)
Jan 24, 2008 -
Re: Chat room adventures
The two guys looked at each other, and Bella had the funny idea that they didn't know much about YWS...or they knew more than they wanted to say. "So, shall ...
Jan 24, 2008 -
Re: The Murdered and the Murderer (extended)
Thanks for all the suggestions! I've been working on this a lot lately, but I'm slightly afraid to post my new one now...Ah well, I'll just have to keep editing. ...
Jan 24, 2008 -
Re: The Bed of Debauchery
Hmm...I really liked this, and I don't know why. I wish I did, because then I could give suggestions, but I don't. Perhaps if I read it when i'm more ...
Jan 24, 2008 -
Re: Little Questions and Thoughts Outloud
Awww! I thought that was absolutely adorable. I really enjoyed the way you went into both characters heads, and showed all their thoughts. Within that short about of time, I ...
Jan 24, 2008 -
Re: Chance Encounter
Well, I really like this. Unlike Seraph, I liked the way it showed into some of the other peoples minds -- I didn't think it was irrelovant. The only thing ...
Jan 24, 2008 -
Re: Pheonix Flame: Human Pain
[quote="wildnaturespirit"] Scorching fire Burning flames The phoenix screeches A trill of pain Silence, Ashes rain Children cry, Mothers weep, Families splintered Dreams turned to shadow Hate, Tears r
Jan 24, 2008
