BelarusBirdy

I think it should be a short story.

Flourish Most of the people connected to the nets don't bother to read the novels posted in the obscure little forum for fiction tales. I have the time and the ...

Rain: I wonder why we're following this kid, anyways. What about the others? Are they runaways? Ah well. It's hard to stay nervous with this big a storm. Wolf looks ...

I was not expecting the ending.

The last line is a question, isn't it? anyways, great poem. I can relate to it. *hits like button* Anyways, very good. And very meaningful.

Rain: Four of us...this is so strange. "People are listening, you know. Do we want the whole world to hear?" I'm just trying to see if anyone else can control ...

I'm gonna point one thing out. In your spoiler, it says Goodgle. I'm assuming you meant Google? Anyways, more great work from Tally-wa! Keep Writing, Bel

I love the last line!

Rain: His accusation is kind of confusing. There are other people that can control them? "What do you mean?" I ask him as I walk closer. The rain is loud, ...

I like the edited version! I command you to make a third one!! IMMEDIATELY!!!!!

"Do you have any medical supplies in that... wherever?" I direct my question to Leroy. "Judd will bleed out soon, and I don't think we want that to happen. Do ...

It's raining. It always seems to be raining when I'm upset. Thunder and lightning and wind and rain seem to be my only friends at times. I wonder if I ...

"Probably, I mean, I don't know of another way to get to that place through the vents."

Anyone have an idea on how we meet?

More good work Tally! I might come back and get some of the small things later, but I'm working on my novel right now.