BelarusBirdy

I love this!!!!!! Fellow fan of both painting and writing...how amazing!!! :) I think your poem is beautiful. It's how I feel about painting, too. Keep writing!!!

I like the meaning it has, not completely abstract, but not just there, no heart-on-the-sleeve type of emotion. It comes from a source of pain, and I respect and relate ...

I love the detail and the words you used!! Great job of description! I loved that it's different. Not everyone can write about something so common and routine as seeing ...

thanks!!

My second post on this site :) my first is in lyric poetry. Comments/criticisms are appreciated!!!

If I'm going to die, I'm entitled to say a few words. Am I right? I don't feel free, I don't feel like me, I may not be flawless, but ...

I appreciate any comments you want to leave :) I'm completely new to this site (though I've been writing since I learned how) and I would really appreciate suggestions from ...

I don't know where I can hide away now. It seems that the sky has fallen, like the angels that trace shining lines of stardust in the heavens. My old ...