BelarusBirdy

This is really good! The description bottle blond is good imagery! Keep writing, Bel

This is a stunningly beautiful piece. It's eloquent and sweet and I started crying while I was reading it. (Not that that's unusual at all...) Keep writing!

This is a really haunting piece. That's what I thought. That being said, I have really strange taste. As soon as I finish typing this, I'm going to like your ...

I love them!! You're right, the first one doesn't go with the rest, but it's really cool!

(OOC: in part because of you, but also because I killed a guard. They probably aren't happy about that. Also, we're on the same floor as the other guys were ...

If I get good reviews and enough likes, I'm going to try to get this published. So if you like it, say something!!! Also, I love getting advice. Any ideas ...

Awesome writing tally!I love the idea! Since I was eight, I've been hunted. I don't know why, or who, or how. But in those seven years, I've learned how to ...

Name: Bellicosa Age: 19 Gender: Female Personality: (Strengths, flaws, likes, dsilikes...) Appearance: (Written optional.) History: Fails at almost every school subject, absolutely NOT athletic. Excel

I like chocolate milk too :)

(OOC: Yeah, that is a fight you wouldn't win!!) Storm: The pale kid is awake. "Who are you?" he says. "Storm," I say. "And Xia." I turn to Xia and ...

(OOC: sorry is so long. Didn't know how to break it up without making some of it not happen.) Xia's footsteps echo loudly against the walls of the corridor. Every ...

tgirly hasn't posted her profile yet, so we have to wait. (unfortunately.)

I think it could be revised a bit, looking at word choice and such, but otherwise it's okay, I think. I don't want to sound harsh though. I really liked ...

If you have one of the "made-up" elements, you basically control different aspects of it. Sound means, for example, that you can control it's volume. As long as you can ...

I made them up. I get bored of "Water, Earth, Air, Fire," all the time. So I thought I would make it more fun and add some more. I'm weird ...