BehindtheMask

Wow! That was great! Your rhythm was fantastic and it flowed off the tongue perfectly. It reads like a poem should :D Also, the emotion is very prominent and I'm ...

Uh.... not really sure what to think of this one. First of all, I think your description is very unappealing to your readers. Perhaps you should change it. I was ...

Hi Smyli! I'm going to review your poem today. :D Okay. I love your poem. It's sweet, emotional, and I'm sure if your mother read this she would be very ...

Your angelic, soft hair, and your shimmering brown eyes. Your sweet voice, flowing in the air, was what made me realize; There's more to tears than sadness, and there's more ...

I'm speechless. This is truly amazing. You are a gifted writer, and the emotion conveyed in this is just overwhelming. It's a work of art, and you have such an ...

First off, I loved this :D It's an amazing summary of the famous procrastination of a writer. Books litter the floor The swivel chair is piled high with junk Right ...

Hi there! You requested that I review this, and so here I am. Okay. First of all, nice storyline, interesting. But this was very difficult to read and very choppy, ...

Wow. This poem was great! Walking away from this dream. It's too painful to remember, All that meant to be together. I love this stanza. It represents the feelings after ...

Honestly? I liked this. It was refined and well-said. I love your use of words and this stanza: Wish I could put into words How adrenaline beats fast And wipes ...

This is sweet. And I like the use of "I wrote a baby poem", because it's very childlike, which gives an even more innocent tone to the piece. Well done!

Wow! I loved the last stanza. It was so perfectly poetic it astounds me. And I adore the title. It's creative and pleasantly unique. Suggestions: I felt myself stranded from ...

Bravo! I absolutely loved this poem. It was heartfelt and sincere and beautiful. It's tragic and true. I’m sorry that I think of you, Here across every night and day. ...

Web of Lies We hide our emotions and from others we shy, Though no one bothers to ask us why. We hide inside our web of lies That torments our ...

I like this. It's amusing and clear cut. Good job!

I truly loved this. And I didn't mind the profanity, which is unusual for me in poems. This was extremely emotional. It also hits a soft spot for me because ...