BehindtheMask

Hello! The poem read very smoothly, the flow was beautiful. The imagery you display is very vivid, I can feel the frigid wind on my face, and the warmth of ...

Chapter Two I started down the road after classes had ended, not sure where I was going. I wanted to talk to Jamie, but she was gone. I couldn't find ...

Author's Note: This story was co written with RebelAngel . I decided to see what kind of feedback we'd get from posting it on YWS, and if it's positive, I'll ...

Hi Delanie :) Honestly, I like it. I think it's good, and relatable, but I'm sorry to say I agree with Tori on some parts. If you don't want the ...

I like this poem. It shows many different things in a few words, and though it's very fast-moving and jumps from sentence to sentence, I think if you tried to ...

Wow! I really enjoyed this one. It's not exactly poetic, but very to the point and true and something everyone who writes in a journal can relate to. I love ...

Hello, FLyerS. I am going to review your poem. First off, I like the change from innocence into darkness. It's pretty interesting. But, when you do this, you have no ...

Hiya! I like it! I have to agree with Kafka in that the Queen's hair does look a little stringy. Also, i think Ace's hair looks great! And really well ...

We’re not bound by blood, We were separated at birth. You’re my unrelated sister, And we always share mirth. I would dive into the darkest Pits of hell for you, ...

Hi Paul! I really liked this ^_^ I love your portrayal of death, and I'm happy to see more of that grim humor. I also really liked the opening, with ...

I don’t need your heart, I only need you. You tell me you care, And I hope it’s still true. For if you were sane, You’d have long ago quit ...

Why hello, my fellow friend and writer. I shall review your poem today. First things first: Dripping from my mouth, Splashing all around. I cover my lips with smeared fingers ...

Wow! Again, MissRockers, you astound me with your amazing writing ability. I think what makes this poem so great is that it tells all the truths of friendship, the ups ...

HI! I'm BehindtheMask and I'm going to review your poem today. I think this poem is very emotionally powerful and very grasping. The rhyme scheme fits is beautifully and is ...

Hello again! I see the improvements you've made, much better!