BehindtheMask

This is VousEsEtonnant and I's entry for the Poetry Pairs contest. Enjoy :D The fire once bled up into the sky Infecting the air with its smoky sigh, Twisting, turning, ...

How can I not compete in this?! Count me in!

I liked this very much! It reminds me of a mix between Tropic Thunder and Hot Fuzz. Like everything is said very fast but in a serious tone and it's ...

Hi Sofie! (Can I call you that?) Wow, I'm surprised this is the first review I've given you after you've given me all those nice reviews! Shame on me. Woah, ...

Hi Lele! I liked it! It was almost like a song, from a Disney movie. Like, "I need to get out of here!". Haha. I'm tired of the same old ...

Hello Rune :) I surprisingly realy liked this poem. And it is surprising because usually I am annoyed by these so-called "emo" poems because they seem, to me at least, ...

Hi again Dante :D To commence, I'd like to say that I really enjoyed this poem. It was well written, descriptive, and conveyed imagery and provoked thoughts quite well. Just ...

Hello Primordiality! I actually liked this poem! It was really well portrayed and written. It's a bit strange to read, especially the ending. But I don't doubt you were going ...

This story has many things in it that are scientifically inaccurate, and yes, I know they couldn't happen. So please don't flame me for that, it's just fiction. They did ...

The Perfect Life They say we live this perfect life, Of love and fulfilled dreams. But dreams always end Sooner than we wish. Between the lines Our hopes are killed ...

Woah!! That was certainly interesting. I wish you'd go into more depth- though, continue it, maybe? You have an entire novel etched out here, and then it just-ends! It's really ...

Hello :D First off, this is a very emotional poem, and it written quite well. A few things though: Gradually mixes with tears streaming, There really doesn't need to be ...

Hello! I liked it. It was sweet and sincere yet had a dark undertone. I love that you give just the slightest glimpse of anger and deception. One thing is ...

Hi Jas :D They became good friends She wore a white shirt He sad he was going to war I think you meant 'said'. He promised he wouldn't get hurt ...

Forgive me if I'm just being ignorant, but to me this just seems like a bunch of words put together without much meaning called a poem. You have way, way ...