BehindtheMask

Hi again! This is very good! The detail is exquisite and I am a huge Damon fan myself ^_^.

Hi Gracie, I'm going to be completely honest. This, here, is hardly a poem. Writing a few so-called "deep" words and making them in poem format does not make a ...

That was very well written! I like that you made it very short, giving us hardly any knowledge of your MC except for a name and a vague appearance. I ...

Wow, Sofie! As promised :D As far as plot goes that was absolutely interesting. I was very intrigued and I think that "Things were pretty shit." is a fantastic hook. ...

Hi Matthews! I must say I really enjoyed this poem. It was a beautiful portrayal of the night sky and very descriptive. I can clearly picture the sky as you've ...

Hi Velvet :) Well, I can guarentee this might come off as a tad harsh, but I'll try the best I can. I think the rhyme scheme is too forced. ...

Hi again lele :D Nitpicks: Dear, Peer Pressure Put the comma after pressure. In a letter, it always goes Dear *name*, and so on. You've come to know me as ...

Wow! That's simply amazing! The detail is miraculously done and very exquisite.

To my Beloved, Remember the old days by the creek bed? We would splash in the water and slosh through the mud, desperately looking for toads and salamanders. You always ...

I liked it :D It was cute and amusing. You may think you're entertaining Italicize "you" to put emphasize on it, and put a comma after entertaining. It feels bare ...

Amusing. ^_^ It's something all of us dedicated readers can relate to, and thus made me laugh. I swear, I'm not drunk. I think the comma is unneeded. I had ...

Hello PinkPanther. I liked it, I enjoy those "expressing individuality" type support groups/poems/songs, etc. They're all sweet and stuff. Okay, first of all, the rhyme scheme was unorganized and slop

Hi Lele! Funny, I wrote a poem a bit ago with the same title. The dark shields our eyes It battles the truth and the lies I'm confused why these ...

I love that you did this! Remembering Sunday is one of my favorite songs :D I thought it was really interesting. I never really thought of the girl committing suicide, ...

Hey! Okay, I'm first going to warn you that this is my first script review and that honestly, I have no interest in reading scripts so this is uncharted territory ...