BehindtheMask

Hi Micki! Wow, I really liked this! I think for a story so short the concept is beautiful and you played it out well. I can't wait for when you ...

Hmm... I do indeed like it, but I think that you could have given little more to it, a little more depth. Just something to have more story and uniqueness, ...

Genre: Mystery Element: the title must be Influenza. Influenza A soft click was the only sound in the deathly silent, stone-gray room as the tape began to record. A man ...

Okay, in a nutshell? Cute. But that's about it. To me, it seems pretty egotistical that you speak so judgementally against a LOT of people simply because of the clothing ...

Puppet Master Hungry with revenge, Though I bite my tongue. Now forced into silence for years to come. Constricted, I’m forced to kneel. Stitched lips, and acid-filled eyes I can ...

Hi! I enjoyed this poem very much. It showcases all of the beautiful elements of poetry in one amazing poem. Imagery is astounding in this. I think what gives it ...

Ha! Finally a bit of poetry that's humorous. This made me smile and for once I'm not all depressed when reading a poem. Thanks.

Wow, Bunny! I love it! It's just the right amount of creepy without being horrifying. Much more original than zombies too... those fairy things, man, they're just weird. XD I ...

If you're offended by any bad talking of religion, please don't take offense to this poem, it's not intended in that way. Hi, I’m agnostic. Hi, I’m agnostic, And I ...

Hello, competition! :) My first thought after reading this is I think perhaps you tried to put a lot of story in a little bit of text. for instance, you ...

Hi NafeCT! :) I'd like to begin by saying this poem was marvelous, controversial, yet true to an extent. It's another one of those things wrong in the world that ...

Hi Kitkat! Okay! First of all, welcome to YWS. Glad to have you here :D. You seem to have a rhyme scheme (see what I did there?), of a basic ...

Hi ! At first, I was expecting that I wouldn't like this and it would be some ridiculous children's story that's very cliche. However, I was pleasantly surprised! That twist ...

Hi Matt! I enjoyed this poem because it is written in such an agressive yet sincere manner. I can very much feel the emotions in this piece, and you portray ...

Hi Bunny! I really enjoyed this! It's unlike anything I've read before and written beautifully. I can very much envision the emotions your MC is speaking of. I also love ...