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BehindtheMask

  • Lyric Poetry Re: A Patriot

    I liked this poem :) I think it has a good meaning and message, and it makes me proud to be an American. We have a lot to be thankful ...

    Feb 17, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Slips of the Pen

    I typically don't like poems of this style, but I actually enjoyed this one. Nice imagery, you really captured the moment in the bar. I can't really make a suggestion ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Warmth-Seeker

    Usually I'm not one for sad endings. But I can't see this story any other way. It was flawlessly and beautifully executed, and the story is enticing and gripping. I ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: This Valentine

    Wow! I really liked this. It's really expressive, and I can relate to your feelings. On Valentine's Day, many of us were feeling that way, and I'm happy you put ...

    Feb 16, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Mermaid

    This is just a triplet I wrote in a poetry class. Enjoy. :D Mermaid She glistens in the water As she dances about the sea A flip in the air ...

    Feb 16, 2011


One believes things because one has been conditioned to believe them.
— Aldous Huxley, Brave New World