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Re: Inspiration...
I quite liked this ^_^ It summs up writer's block quite nicely. And it's also very inspirational ;D And I love that while looking for inspiration, you wrote a poem ...
Feb 28, 2011 -
Re: Death
Hi there! I love the imagery in this poem. While quite gruesome and somewhat revolting, the images are very vivid. I especially like, You, the Dead Man with your loose ...
Feb 27, 2011 -
Re: A Couple's Love
I really enjoyed this poem. It's very beautiful, honest, and sincere. I especially adore the third stanza, The married couple, Fighting all day Stressed about this and that He works ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Hope Lives
Hope Lives In time, they say, all will come to an end. Life wishes to bring peace to every day, Though sometimes life doesn't get its way. And every creature ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: In Memoriam - Part I: The Customer
Wow! That was truly incredible. This is one of the most attention-grasping stories I've ever read. It's very unique. Now for the close-up :D I'm the Grim Reaper, in case ...
Feb 21, 2011 -
Re: Cruel Irony (a metaphorical poem about people I know)
Wow! I did love this. You had some fantastic lines. Especially the first, I have seen a stone statue cry tears of anguish. In fact, the whole first stanza was ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Bloodsuckers
I loved this! It was beautiful and the images appeared perfectly in my mind. It is truly a masterpiece. One suggestion I can make is, while I loved the use ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Flower
Wow! I absolutely love the emotion conveyed in this poem. It portrays a life experience many of us go through. I especially love the lines, No, the beauty will always ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: A Quiet Path
First off, I like it! It overall flowed nicely and it displays a clear mental image. While it is a bit confusing, I think one of the main points of ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Blue Skies *EDITED*
Author's Note: Hey all! I completely changed this prologue around. I thought this little entry would be a better introduction. What do you think? Should I continue this? Blue Skies ...
Feb 20, 2011 -
Re: Wouldn't Mind, Being Blind
Maybe I've misread the notion, but I can kind of relate to the feelings conveyed in this poem. In a way. I suppose if we were blind, we wouldn't have ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: 3 Poems on Childhood
Wow! These are very expressive and emotional. I can really relate to these especially because I'll be starting High School next year, and i'm really afraid to leave my childhood ...
Feb 19, 2011 -
Re: Pain is Beauty
Pain is Beauty They dance around lightly, each and every day And twirl 'round in circles, enchanting in their way. It seems so amazing, a gift they carry Though those ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Forget
This speaks the truth. You spoke natural truths of humanity that are the same for everyone yet nobody likes to admit to. And you did this while maintaining rhythm and ...
Feb 17, 2011 -
Re: Unreal Letters
At first, I'll admit, I was a bit confused by this poem. But then I read it again, and it made so much more sense. I enjoyed this poem. it ...
Feb 17, 2011
