BehindtheMask

I adore this poem. It begins dark and gloomy, and then gradually becomes sweet and hopeful. On fire and bright, Doesn't really make sense. I know it's supposed to be ...

Hi Ebony. Reading this poem, all I get is an immense wave of self pity and it's way too strong. I agree wholeheartedly with Perse and Snoink. It is very ...

Hi :D I admire the emotion you portray in this poem. It may not be very well written, but I can definitely relate to the emotion in this, so you ...

Hey Aliaaryn :D I really admire what you're trying to get across here, but you're just not quite there yet. Reading this poem, I feel no emotion but gut-wrenching annoyance ...

Lace

6/10 Points because I know two of those songs :) 1. Camisado- Panic! At The Disco 2. Remembering Sunday- All Time Low 3. Citizen/Soldier- 3 Doors Down 4. Taking Over ...

Starstrukk- 3oh!3 ;)

BrotherAustria

Hey Smylin! Well, this has certainly sparked my interest. I'm intrigued to find out what exactly is this boys story. What's special about him? Why write a story about him? ...

All so pretty!!! :)

With every passing day it becomes more natural- the feeling of disintegration, that the old person I once was is now dead and something new has taken her place, somebody ...

Hi Cassandra! You looked to me for inspiration , And sadly, you found none . You flourished in my resignation , Not knowing you were my son . ^ This ...

Hi Angel. I think sarebear covered pretty much everything as far as nitpicks, so I'll leave you with this: I was drawn in immediately by the first stanza, but in ...

Well, here's me: Wow, you're thirteen?!? You look so mature ! :D -Alzora Heh. Thanks. :D My friend's brother said it needed more tophat: tophat.png

Well, here's me: liv2.png